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Thursday 26 March 2015

Big splash

It was cool in Big Splash i had to cheer for the class. Some people didn't swim. The girls went first it was leioa. Iona .poshua. leioa won vsing room 20. Room16 and room 17. Then lona came first as well poshua came second Then the boys. The boys where elijah.kenz and cases. Elijah came first and kenz came first and cases came second. Then it was backstroke. The people that went was wu.himi and then rorik. Wu went first. Get ready set go. Wu went so crazy on that swim. The people that did not swim was cheering for the swimmers . wu came first then rorik. Rorik went second. himi came first. Next the nell doll race. The people that was on the nell doll race was Sher. Baz Christopher. Christopher came third . Sher came third baz came third . then the finals. The girls the. The girls was leioa . Iona. Poshua. leioa came first and iona poshua. Then the boys the boys was elijah. kenz. and cassius. Get ready set GO elijah went so fast like flash it was amazing. Next was kenz. Get ready set GO kenz went. He was speeding as he can. Next was cassius. Get ready set go cassius was so speedy. like a car . just saying . then the points. Room 16 had 12. Room 17 had 15 room 20 had 19 and my class had 20 we won Big Splash everybody was jumping around then every body got chance and then we went to lunch.
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous26 March 2015 at 19:01

    Hi Jedi, glad you were able to publish to your blog.You need to work on following through with editing feedback.

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  2. Anonymous27 March 2015 at 11:50

    Hi Jedi I really like your document because you told us what happened step by step and it was funny and easy to understand who was in it. But I think you should work on knowing how to spell peoples names before you publish it and also work on making your words make sense because I cant really understand some sentences and I think you should also try to put some interesting words in it and also in some sentences if you want to talk about more then one thing you should put commas not fullstops. But anyhow you did a really great job with your work.
    From Hebah

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  3. samlyons29 March 2015 at 10:08

    Hey Jedi,
    You did a great job of recounting all that happened on the day of the Big Splash. Congratulations to Room 19.
    Mr Lyons

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