Positive Blog Comments

Today I have been learning how to do a comment on other peoples blog. I have asked a question and told them why I liked their post.

it is about commenting on blogs

top tips by Jedidiah  on GoAnimate
This animation is about commenting on blogs.

The Big bad Wolf

The wolf

WALT: describe

Remember to:

• use looks, actions and characteristics
• use describing words
• similes and metaphors
• paragraphs (from planning sheet)  

NEVER EVER TRUST A BIG BAD WOLF BECAUSE HE MIGHT  EAT YOU. HE HAS A UGLY face with big nose and red eyes. The wolf has a HAIRY STOMACH which looks like a hairy jumper. HE HAS SHARP TEETH AND HE IS NANTES (naughty). HE IS AS  DANGEROUS AS A SHARK because he will eat you up.

The wolf likes to dress as grandma and pretend so that he can eat Little Red Riding Hood. He likes to sleep in a cave. The wolf will tease animals and eat them.